Days Until Home
By: Mark Gardner, Greg Dragon, David Kristoph
Release Date: 07/04/2017
Overall Rating: 3/5
Plot: 3/5
Characters: 3/5
Writing: 2/5
Days Until Home is a collaborative novel written by three different authors. It tells the story of the mining ship Kerwood and its crew as they pull a normal mining contract on an asteroid and prepare to go home. A massive explosion cripples the ship and leaves the crew and miners struggling to recover both physically and emotionally from the devastation.
I really wanted to love this book. I was primed for it: hard sci-fi is what I grew up reading. I was excited about the potential of the blurb I read, which is why I requested the ARC from NetGalley in the first place. Unfortunately, this piece remains potential without a backbone. Most of the problems with the book can be traced back to its collaborative nature, unfortunately. I suspect it was way more fun to write than it was to read, speaking from the experience of a collaborative fiction writer (hi, Robin!).
For me, it came down to too many cooks in the kitchen. I found it nearly impossible to identify a main character, which given the multiple red herrings and switchbacks that the authors used, was probably intentional. There were so many named characters who had no depth or background beyond their presence in the crew of the Kerwood that I almost needed a chart to keep track of them and who they were sleeping with, affiliated with, and distrusted by. They all had potential depth, but they weren't important enough to the story to get more than a first name, a hair color, and a death scene.
In my notes as I was reading this, I reached the one-third point still filled with hope and excitement. I could see that the writers had the ability to build suspense and drive the plot forward. The sad part was that all that suspense was quickly resolved and drifted off to follow another aspect of the story. Instead of staying closely tied to a few characters, I read from the point of view of so many that I wasn't even sure who I was supposed to be cheering for.
Additionally, from a diversity in sci-fi perspective, I was very disappointed in the society that was built in this story. One of the protagonists, Viktor, is frequently cited as being Russian, with a thick Balkan accent, but this seems to be only an affectation. His perspective is the same as all the other characters, with nothing in it to make him uniquely Russian. For that matter, why is Earth still using the same country designations this far into the future, when it seems that country lines have been put aside in favor of planetary or settlement affiliations?
While I applaud the inclusion of women in space, especially those who apparently have a lesbian or bisexual orientation, most of the women seem to be either crazy, sexually attractive, or sexually neutral but loyal. Dialog between female characters was woefully under-researched; they talked to each other like heroines from a romance novel, all figurative imagery and earnest fluff. For that matter, one of the red herrings (spoilers) centers on the idea that women can't stand the conditions in space and so they build an illicit shower in one of the holding tanks and sold shower time to the other female crew members.
In conclusion, if this had been written by only one or two of the authors, it might have been a decent hard sci-fi novel. As it stands, I found it a meandering and underdeveloped read.
**EDIT** Shortly after posting this review, one of the authors contacted me and I learned that it was originally written as a serial story at Article 94.This put much of the writing style in context for me. While most of my criticism still stands, the pacing issues make more sense now if it was written chapter-by-chapter instead of as a novel.
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